Tuesday, February 27, 2007

desire

Topic: Alligator river story
The situation Abigal and Gregory are in is a common one. There are always times when two people in love can’t always be together. The time apart is what makes relationships grow stronger. In this case it is a little different. They have never been together and dying to get into one another arms.
The problem with being able to see each other is that there is a river with countless alligators between the two of them. The bridge had been washed away and it would be several weeks before it could be replaced. Abigal was determined to get across the bridge and would be willing to do almost anything to get across it. She had no way of getting to the next bridge and crossing that way because she couldn’t get back in time for work the next day. She took matters into her own hands and asked sinbad, a riverboat captin to take her across. The only way he would agree to doing so, if she had sexual intercourse with him.
Abigal at first turned him down, and only when she realized there was no other way of gitting across she agreed to the circumstances. On the way over I wonder what was going through her mind and how was she going to tell Gregory how about agreeing to doing what she had to do. When she told Gregory the scrafices she made to get over there he had every intention of getting mad in any way he pleased. If the girl I loved agreed to doing that I would tell her that she would have been better off just staying on the other side of the river. That was the whole purpose of her going over there was to be with him, and in my opinion she ruined anything that they might have had. At least from my point of view it did. Sinbad had no right to do what he did to Gregory or Abigal. If that had been me I might of tought sinbad a lesson or two about taking advantage of people
Alligators I give the number one rating to because they were the only characters that did what they were supposed to do
Gregory I put second on my list because he got mad just like I would have
Sinbad should be more towards the end of my list and the reason why is he took advantage of Abigal.
Abigal I put next to last because she did the most stupidest thing by agreeing to sinbads offer.
I put slug last because I dont know where he even came from and why did he beat gregory up.

3 comments:

Addy said...

pass. good introduction and supporting details. watch out for your spelling errors and run-ons. be sure to have the correct puncuation in the right place. other than that, keep up the good work.

Brady Allen Wilson Brummitt said...

Pass. You said "The situation Abigal and Gregory are in is a common one." I strongly disagree with this. I will personally write you an apology if you can recite three instances of lovers being separated by a river full of gators.

GRLucas said...

Pass.

Daniel, I still don't understand why you can't skip a line in between ¶s like I instructed. Your entries are more difficult to read because of this problem.